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Veil of Betrayal


Roses die
While Lovers lie
Unaware
Trapped in despair

(sorry poetry not my strong suit)

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I enjoyed this piece... The part that shook me the most in this poem is the line where the speaker says, "...Unaware/ trapped in despair..." Despair is something that's so heavy and almost tangible that it's hard to imagine that one can be unaware of it. Deep...

-with divine purpose